November 26, 2009
due to a situation within the family that i caused im unable to come here this situation has made me postpone or cease writing but i will return after my completion of high school
who knows maybe ill write much better in the future
thanks for being a reader
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Posted by fly1623
November 20, 2009
the words dont sound good and the title doesnt sound good enough i dont have all the words to it but i call it:
I Can See It In Your Eyes
I can see it in your eyes hear it in your laugh
I can just tell its one of your dreams
I can see it in your smile all day every time
Full and bright as your eyes are it never fades away
I can see it in your eyes the beauty of your sight the lovely vision of light you give me
I can hear it in your laugh it brightens my day
I can tell it’s in your dreams because you wake up with a smile
What I see in you is happiness
then the other version is called
You Can See It In Her Eyes
same words just replace i with you and your with her
please tell me your opinion on it
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Posted by fly1623
November 18, 2009
i have 4 poems im going to write next week just so i dont forget
1. respect
2. beauty
3. life
and 4. was school i think
those arent the titles just topics and due to circumstances i cant write them this week or right now
Thanks, future reader
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